Hi my name is Stanlee, I go to Red Hill School. I like the way you described your my brother like radio. You could make more slides about other in you family. I hope we can do this next year.
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Hi, I love how you said your brother is a radio and I enjoyed reading all the facts.
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Hi my name is Stanlee, I go to Red Hill School. I like the way you described your my brother like radio. You could make more slides about other in you family. I hope we can do this next year.
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ReplyDeleteThanks for the feedback I really like that you liked my post Thanks for reminding me that I can do other family members.