Kiaora Patrick, My name is Anjekoia. I am from Red Hill School. I like the way you presented your slide. Always remember to use capitals in your slides so its a good presentation. Your sentences have to make sense for a good presentation.
Hi Patrick, my name is Sean and I go to Red Hill School.I really liked how you put interesting information. It would be better if you put more information about plants.
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Kiaora Patrick, My name is Anjekoia. I am from Red Hill School. I like the way you presented your slide. Always remember to use capitals in your slides so its a good presentation. Your sentences have to make sense for a good presentation.
ReplyDeleteHi Patrick, my name is Sean and I go to Red Hill School.I really liked how you put interesting information. It would be better if
ReplyDeleteyou put more information about plants.